rock to the rhythm of the funky rhyme ([info]awesomeoutloud) wrote,
@ 2008-07-14 23:30:00
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Entry tags:!fic: pete/patrick

and then:
..

mrs. stump's full length mirror
pete/patrick, mature


Pete has learned to appreciate a woman who takes pride in how she looks. The kind of woman who gets up a little earlier, puts just a little more effort into her appearance.

Or at least Patrick's mother, who at the very least, likes to glance at herself. Whether she actually puts a lot of thought into what she sees looking back at her from the full length mirror in her bedroom, well, Pete doesn't know.

Maybe she just likes to make sure she matches.

Truth is, Pete doesn't give a fuck. Not even a little bit.

Patrick had said, "Please, don't."

He'd said he just needed to grab a pair of socks from his father's dresser, said he keeps forgetting to collect all of his that always seem to disappear under his bed. Barefoot in his parents bedroom, Patrick had said 'this isn't a good idea' and 'please Pete' and 'I've never...'

I've never, he'd said.

Patrick kept protesting, dropping down to his knees. Had kept trying to convince himself, probably, he didn't want to, as he took shuttering uneasy breaths, pulling Pete's jeans down around his hips.

And Pete had watched, completely there yet completely detached. Had watched, amazed as Patrick, tiny still-in-high school Patrick, stuck out his tongue, tasting. He'd watched in Mrs. Stump's full-length bedroom mirror as her son choked down his first cock, moaned around the thickness of it, gasped for breath, a sticky rope of spit and come tethering his mouth to the tip.

In the mirror, he could see Patrick's toes, curling into the carpet. His little baby toes.

Pete twisted his fingers into Patrick's soft hair, pulling him closer, saying, "It's okay, just relax." Saying, "Breathe through your nose."

And Patrick was pushing his palm against the front of his jeans, humping his hand. Patrick was making porno sounds round Pete's cock.

Patrick was pulling away, sitting back and looking up at Pete with his pretty face and red, prettier lips, swollen - was looking up at Pete with saliva dripping down his chin, Pete's pre-come - and him and his reflection were saying, "Fuck me."

So in Mrs. Stump's bedroom, Pete pushed Patrick down onto his back, pulled off his shirt, took off his jeans. It didn't take much, just a few strokes and Patrick was coming - so young and eager and virgin - and Pete slid his fingers through the mess on Patrick's stomach, slicked them.

His thighs had fallen open easily, wantonly, and Pete pushed one finger lubed with come into Patrick, then another, stretching, until Patrick was hard again, until he was pulling at Pete's shirt. Pulling him closer. Until Patrick's feet were planted on the rug, his hands above his head braced against the side of his parents' bed, desperately fucking himself with Pete's fingers.

"Christ," Pete had said, licking a wet sticky stripe up his neck to his open, panting mouth. "You're kind of a slut for it, aren't you?"

And Patrick whined, moving a little faster, whispering over and over, "I'm ready, I'm ready, I'm ready."

It was doubtful, Pete knew, little Patrick so young and stupid and hot and slutty. Patrick probably didn't really know what he wanted.

But that didn't stop Pete from picking him up, hooking Patrick's knees over his shoulders. Patrick's head thrown back, pupils blow wide, on the floor of his parents bedroom, groaning as Pete pushed into him. Not careful or sweet, though he should have been. But desperate and finally.

Watching himself force his dick into Patrick, watching the way his muscles moved, the way Patrick reached down to grip at Pete's hips - it couldn't be real. It was clearly some sort of funhouse mirror, full of lies and sweet tasting unknowns. Places Pete will never really be allowed to go.

But Pete still pulled almost all the way out, only to push back in harder. And again. And again.

And Patrick, flailing for something to grasp on to, hands flying to find the corner leg of the bed frame, gripping it tightly, using it to pull himself back and forth, meeting Pete's harsh thrusting.

And the filthy things coming out of Pete's mouth, things he didn't even know he wanted to do to Patrick, but was doing - and the way Patrick was barely put together, tight wound tension ready to explode. His voice, like rolling thunder across the room where Patrick's parents kept his baby scrapbooks and report cards and childhood drawings, telling Patrick how tight he was, how hot he looked taking it, how Pete wanted to come all over him.

And Patrick's gasping response, more like a cry than not, "Yes, please. Anything, anything." Tightening around Pete's cock as he came again, riding it out, arching up to catch Pete's mouth, kissing him loud and sloppy and wet.

And Pete, watching the way Patrick was watching him as he pounded into him, straining, shaking, pulling out and coming across Patrick's soft skinned belly.



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[info]nejem
2008-10-15 01:25 pm UTC (link)
mygod *___*
this was absolutely perfect and hot and I loved it so much I can't even express it with words *____*
amazing *____*

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 09:14 pm UTC (link)
all those words were PERFECT. you win. :D
thaaanks!

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[info]crash_it_yo
2008-10-15 02:20 pm UTC (link)
oh my god, have my babies

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 04:24 pm UTC (link)
sure, i'm totally easy like that.

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[info]raverbear64
2008-10-15 07:47 pm UTC (link)
holycrap.
I don't know if there are words for how hot that was.
Short and sweet and perfect.
I love mirrors...btw.
(:

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 09:13 pm UTC (link)
who doesn't love mirrors.
if I saw something like this in them, all the time, I'd love them too.

(: thanks!

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[info]kittygrenade
2008-10-15 10:42 pm UTC (link)
Hey!Hey! I'm the one who requested this!

Anyway, holy-hell was that hott! *flails*
It just perfect and magical and I love it!
Thank you soooo much!!!

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 04:26 pm UTC (link)
check out us being all not anonymous, except I still sort of am!

yay! I'm glad this was acceptable!
i usually fail big time with prompts and such.

:D :D

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[info]kittygrenade
2008-10-16 09:05 pm UTC (link)
We have uber anon skillz!

It was more than acceptable.
I would say you were pretty spot on with everything!

No fail here! =^-^=

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 10:22 pm UTC (link)
*HIGH FIVES* how are we so awesome?

:D

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[info]kittygrenade
2008-10-17 02:32 am UTC (link)
*HIGH FIVES BACK* I think our love for Patrick/Pete has something to do with it!

=^.^=

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[info]desireem81
2008-10-16 12:39 am UTC (link)
HOLY SHIT!!!

That was...

What I needed and didn't know. Damn I was craving some amazing Pete and Patrick sex...

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 04:23 pm UTC (link)
that is totally what i'm here for:
fulfilling the needs you don't even know you have. :D

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[info]exorcise
2008-10-16 07:55 am UTC (link)
I fail at leaving coherent feedback but ohgod.♥

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 04:23 pm UTC (link)
i fail at coherent anything, so I understand. <3

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[info]sharon_hate
2008-10-16 08:05 pm UTC (link)
That was pretty much the greatest thing I've ever read, omg.

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-16 09:11 pm UTC (link)
oh, you.
i can tell already you're a big flirt. :D

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[info]eyerenderingfan
2008-10-17 02:59 am UTC (link)
wow um, wow..I um..wow
That was soo perfect..
I can't really say..well..of fav line: "..In the mirror, he could see Patrick's toes, curling into the carpet. His little baby toes."
I AM A FAN OF URS! <3

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-17 03:28 am UTC (link)
haha, OMG, that is my favorite line too. I mean, not to pat myself on the back or anything. Or come off like a creep. Though, you liked it too, so, if I'm creepy, so are you. um.

A FAN? Oh, you.

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-17 03:28 am UTC (link)
omg, a creep. Not creepy. I refuse to delete this comment and try again anymore. :x

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[info]xmexandxyoux
2008-10-17 06:42 pm UTC (link)
mmm, mirror!seckz.
:]
*mems*

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-17 09:01 pm UTC (link)
always good times.

<3

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[info]invadernina
2008-10-22 04:30 am UTC (link)
oh jeebus that was hot.
I just now discovered this community through anon_lovefest and this is a FANTASTIC introduction.

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[info]awesomeoutloud
2008-10-22 07:26 pm UTC (link)
hee, thanks. :D

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